Initial Design of the Storyboard

I've roughly planned my storyboard and choose the nursery rhyme pease porridge, and the original is as follows:

"pease porridge hot, pease porridge cold, 

  pease porridge in the pot nine days old

                        some like it hot, some like it cold,

                                        some like it in the pot nine days old."

I came up with a few initial ideas, and this is the one I did the rough story board on post-it note.